Cracked, like a shell.
Oh god this is hell.
Exposed, oh well,
Stab you needles,
Stick your prods,
Lord Jesus,
Where's the gods?
Unsolved.
I'm still a problem.
i am still un fixed
I am still un adjusted.
I am still perfectly busted.
I am still completely whole,
don't be mad, if I won't play the role.
The lies took it's tole.
Youth was stole.
But that's the ol'
the ol'
the ol'
the ol'
The hole.
The Hole that has grown.
Grown to immense,
Grown to dense,
Grown to be a Sense,
6th if you like,
6th if you strike out wildly
Blindly,
Trying for binds t'be
Tight.
Fight:
and like a noose, it tightens
Frightens. Incitin'
Struggle.
Dont let you feet dangle.
Not for these fools.
Creeperforce24
Drunk or not, failure or not, this poem is amazing! I have a good feeling people in the writing forums would love this!
Writing forums!
https://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/forum/18
Hey man, I don’t know what you’re going through, but it’s gonna be aight! Cause I feel you can get up again, maybe I’m just saying that, but it’s always good to have some form of hope for others, wouldn’t you agree?